So your route is different. I'd suggest learning DW Reds first off. Every category 16+ needs DW reds so it's worth your time. My DW with reds is about 2:10 in my PB so in time your 2:15 duration for that split would still be legit. Then I'd get 2 stars in SSL instead of 1 (bird and top of the pyramid). I'd only get 1 in LLL (Reds) and then 2 in HMC (emergency exit and rolling rocks) plus the toad before you enter HMC. Fire Sea could use some work too, 2:30 could come down to 2:00 flat and still be pretty comfy I think. A 4:40 BitS is a bit high. I'd give BitS a bunch of practice and see if you can knock off like, at least a full minute.

Without knowing/seeing how you run I again can't give super straight forward advice. I might say change your route but it's not really the right call because there's something else that needs to be addressed first. No trick or route change will ever give you the results that practice and time will though. Just gotta put the hours in at the end of the day.

Klepko screws me all the time so I do the bully star in LLL since it would take more time for me to do klepko instead of the Big Bully. But I can start practicing it thou.

Give me a second and I will show you an unfinished run for a rough idea. Since I haven’t recorded a finished run yet

It might take a while since I recorded the run on a second device that is dead RN.

Sadly I can’t send it since the video is in my photos and won’t be able to send since it is not on the internet

No worries. I am not an expert and I'm not even really good at the game compared to some people on here so take everything I say with a grain of salt. Hopefully you can find one or two good things that are helpful in all of it though and improve. If I was going to boil everything down and leave you with just one thing I'd say try another category. 70-star is fun and approachable and WILL make you better at 16-star.

THX